NoahSky

so far you have a really good story here. Im looking forward to you updating more. keep up the good work editing to. you have a really good plot line as well.

I like the derversity of the characters personalities. Please keep up the good work. You also have a excellent plot line. I'm look forward to seeing where you take us reader's with this story.

Thank you!😇 Your review is appreciated 💛

I really like this story and can't wait to read more. When I have time, your story is well written. Please keep up the great work, im excited to read more.

I think your story has great potential, it need's some editing here and their. please continue updating this story :) I'm looking forward to it 😊

Thank you! I plan on updating very soon 🥰

Thank you so much for your honesty! I only hope to grow as a author and to learn how to tell my stories better. Constructive criticism helps so much💕

I really like your story! I see alot of potential with your novel and story line. I like how you let the MC express how they feel. Keep up the great work.

Thank you! I love constructive criticism, how would I get any better with out it 😅 I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.

Thank you 😊 Gramer is my weakest point. Im working on it, soon I will try out grammerly app. I love constructive criticism 😇