Literopat

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I can state with certainty that the main character is an imbecile. Making armored clothing and leaving exposed areas of skin is the height of idiocy. After all, these are work clothes and their task is to preserve life. If you dress up like a peacock, it means that something is wrong with your head.

Is it really impossible to somehow reduce the list of perks? I think it's a waste of space, or the author is just too lazy to write a sequel and is trying to increase the volume of text.

Faraday was a fixer for many years? There's a clear mistake here somewhere.

Cliffhanger? Seriously? That's such a cheap trick.

Is it really impossible to do without terms like shitjutsu and kido-ass-ido? I'm not a fan of Bleach and don't understand much about these words.

What's the dumbest thing you can do with a high-tech space fortress? Landing it on a planet, of course. That's like using a sniper rifle as a club.

Is it possible to do without no-name characters? Mac saved the boy? Well done, then you can give him a kick in the ass at the nearest settlement and do something more useful. If you really want to introduce a new character, then it would be better if it was a hot babe, not a shit-covered boy.

Only a child chooses, a man takes everything.

Seriously? He wasn't smart enough to take a rock or a piece of rebar and just smash the cabinet? Even a monkey could do that. Imbecile.