Major0127

I like when he say that

I am french and I don’t understand any word

This story is a good idea but the main character has many name because the author change the name at each sentence and this is very tiresome to read. What´s more the ninjutsu spelling is wrong for example is « Katon » and no « Cato ». These errors do not allow to immerse ourselves in the story.

Oh a new name again

The MC is strong but no op so the story isn’t boring. Shun is well developped and I like his personnality. The GoM are well developped too and I like how their personnalities are different from the anime. ( Sorry for errors, I am not english )