Hensonn

I will have to hide my talent and not tell anyone about my progress, and the next day he immediately tells his friend.trash........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

this novel would be good if the main character didn't hide his cultivation.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

the title does not correspond to the novel................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

this is again a novel with a harem..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I advise the author to make the main character more adult and reduce the amount of humor (although it's not even funny) and obscene language that would be inappropriate for zombies.Believe me, this greatly spoils the atmosphere of the novel. The reader is trying to see the main character in the role of a zombie and not a person this will help you not to miss the audience

Although the main character is a zombie, he is too emotional. Such main characters are not interesting and often they always want to return to human life or form, although it would be much more interesting if they were chasing only force

The main character is a crybaby, he can't solve his problems by himself. He needs the help of other people to solve his problems...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I can't even imagine what kind of people read this trash....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

A typical dumb protagonist with the mind of a child.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I can't even imagine what kind of people read this work,.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................