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DeathWalker133yrBerkomentarthe plot is a bit linear. i still feel the mc lacks complete characterization and he was obviously gaining the "author's favored" privilage. this makes him a bit overpowered. clearly, he still lacks the profound knowledge he should be carrying when he was an Immortal. however, i like his extraordinary charm and influence. thanks, author, for writing such book.🖒
Ch 69 A Goddess Descends (End of Vol.1)- DeathWalker133yrBerkomentar
hehehe
"So? When are you going to reveal yourself? Surely you did not come all the way here just to look at my handsome face, right?" - DeathWalker133yrBerkomentar
ten square meters! 5meters by 2 meters?!! what a narrow! 😂😂just kidding
Once Bu Fang was back in the restaurant, he took a look at the empty place and sighed. Even though the restaurant was simple, it was neat and tidy. With an area of ten square meters and a few sets of tables and chairs, it was indeed a small restaurant. - DeathWalker133yrDiterbitkan
Right. I would really need to write a decent novel with at least the complete elements so I will expect updates from you. They say that how good you read is how well you write. Can you also teach me how to 'read'? I want to maximize my reading efficiency as I have a trouble generating imagery inside my head especially on how the setting and the character looks like. That is a great hindrance to my improvement.😊
- DeathWalker133yrBerkomentarCh 1 Chapter 1: Characters start with attitude
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I stand with my eyes open. i only see eyes whenever my eyes closes
How Do You Sleep at Night? - DeathWalker133yrBerkomentar
expectation😏
Scared to Tears - DeathWalker133yrBerkomentarCh 7 Ghost Marriage
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jaz do it😏
"Since the harder the mission, the better the reward, shall I give this Nightmare Mission a try?" - DeathWalker133yrBerkomentar
jaz do it😏
"Since the harder the mission, the better the reward, shall I give this Nightmare Mission a try?" - DeathWalker133yrBerkomentar
😂seriously. is haunted house really that outdated?
Chen Ge continued to read; the current scenario of the Haunted House, Night of the Living Dead, was brutally criticized. Even the Minghun scenario that got onto the papers before only managed to get a 0.5-star rating. - DeathWalker133yrBerkomentarCh 1 Dying House of Horrors
- DeathWalker133yrBalas Astral_Ascent