I’m soooooooooooooooooooo annoyed I like his and madaras friendship and like the way you did madara and I liked the fast paceness of it everything was fine even like the heroines n

I hope Lois lane from smallville of Diana gal gadot versio or both

Yo who is the main heroine?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

It has the makings of a good fix but I don’t like how he joins the marines and nerfs himself it’s boring and overused it quickly became something im uninterested in but that’s because I’ve read to much one piece fic idk what you would have to do to make it interesting for me again

Boring dude I don’t see how a dragon that’s basically a deadly nadder will be able to do anything against a night fury or bewilderbeast it’s dropped what a waste of a oc dragon

It’s on mtlnation it might be a better translation

Yup

Mc

Ruined the story at the yuri and didn’t do it with me now I literally care nothing for the story or either jeane or artoria so sucks but dropp ed

Keep up the good work just wish u would update the Opm more really good also I hope his heroine is rumi /mirko

Who’ the girl in the cover photo ????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Haven’t read any of it just curious ???????????????????

Madara solos sharingan gains all of the haki he would also have the strongest of all three and if we’re being technical haki is like spiritual power and chakra is a comba of that and physical power so every ninjutsu affects them and if u don’t count that truth seeking orbs definitely hurt them and most likely kill them

Idk know if u ever watch or read Naruto but u put shanks on madaras level rogers on the sage of six paths level man I hope your trolling shanks would be lucky to have a chance against itachi let alone madara and madara body’s all of one piece alone

Madara has a weak physic yea takes a full powered attack from might guy that would kill all of the Yonko together and healed instantly

What is wrong with the author itachi is around pains level and double it’s his power and he this weak he should already be the strongest in one piece

Least fav in bleach