evilselkie

Childish writing, nothing makes sense, characters act like silly kids.

Is the author 10 years old? Characters acting immature, capital letters everywhere, plot points that make no sense (why does she need to be transmigrated? Why give her an old dress when you're trying to show her off? Why make her attend if she might collapse and embarrass you?). Just 'the author got an idea and never thought about any of it'.

Calm down with the CAPITALS. They don't help. Just write "Something!" , he shouted. Like a normal person.

He's 'finding it hard to understand her'? She's using short, clear words. She spelled it out. What does she have to do, tattoo 'F Off' across her forehead?

Very awkward writing/translating, hard to understand. The start is very abrupt, just throwing things in without smooth transitions. The author didn't bother thinking about how things work and why the characters would do things, so it comes across as childish.

Very cliche face-slapping novel with a Mary Sue lead, but some very distracting errors. Chapters 6 and 7 are the wrong novel.

Seriously needs proofreading, there are so many mistakes that it's hard to understand sometimes. Plot starts very silly and over the top.

If you're going to change the names, remember in English you mostly only use the first name, and try to keep the names straight.

Writer can't keep track of character names and keeps randomly changing them. Cliche, cardboard characters and a plot that makes no sense.

Well, she's useless as a parent, isn't she? Doesn't even try to explain anything or talk to the children. It's the 4th day and she hasn't fed or washed them once. They'd be better off raised by wolves.