Perseus_Peverell

Madara was able to activate and deactivate his Rinnegan. Natural wielders should be able to, I believe, they just don't for whatever reason. Even Itachi had his Sharingan active all the time.

No some of your earlier chapters were very similar to another Pokemon story, Pokemon: An Unexpected Journey. Your story has gotten a lot better and different than the other one. That one got needlessly edgy and almost GrimDark! Keep up the good work.

Yes, I never imagined the Weasleys to act like how it is portrayed here.

Fullbring arc was one of the most boring arcs in Bleach for me, apart from the fillers. Even some of the fillers were better, like the Muramasa one.

Actually 12 year olds asking those type of questions is not offensive, and I am not sure why but Ron is demonized a lot in Fanfics. He is the least favored child in the family, everything he owns is hand me down. So him asking him for a new wand should not anger Molly as the rest of the children do get things that Ron does not.

Not a good ending, should have finished with the Triwizard. The last part just leaves a sour taste.

I don't know why this story doesn't have enough Power stones. But here is one from me, and I will add a few more in the coming day. Excellent story and a fun read.

Feels like filler in a fanfic.

You just updated the wrong chapter to the wrong story I believe,

Not believable, Yamamoto barely moves, and only acts out very rarely. Furthermore no one was killed or going to be killed.