+1 for help to auther

plz do write this fanfic

yes, you get someone to read, and give advice about you're work, what to improve, what is best to not add or to add, things like that.

hmm, fun idea, I would say you're way to fast with everything, you need to slow done a bit, also i do advice you get a beta reader.

aaa so much dxd, nice

kept up the good work, also good choice in everything.

why would be negative like this, they are wrighting a good story not everybody just starts out as a 5 star story maker, also you would do you mean by not being random then, this is a book, what that means is that a wright goes and selects everything they need to wright the story they are think of, not a lot of people can just randomly select something and make a sorry, also if you read they underline meaning you sea that all her command knowledge is in her skills.

i concur that I would love to keep reading this, would you be so kind as to keep have the will and strength to wright, safe travels knowledge spreader.

Cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese

if you make him able to take a illusions form make it a young female like from that one anime, it would be so funny.

if it's not 69 I would be disappointed

SHE HAS THE ORB OF Tentacle ****** HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

This is good keep up the good work and I hope you have a nice day

That man is very handsome

Plz this one seem interesting and I would like to continue reading it. Hope you have a great day!!!

This story is super awsome and please don't drop it. .

More plz. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..

/more this/

Please udpdata dies is a very fun read..

Please don't stop updating this is a very fun read.