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WHY ARE YOU HERE. THIS BOOK WAS ABANDONED LONG AGO AHHHH

I had to delete it since there was a bug with the contract application process. They recommended I delete it and reupload it. It’ll be up soon once it gets vetted with a few minor changes. Sorry 😣

Thank you for the stones! ⸜(｡˃ ᵕ ˂ )⸝

That's a good idea since I already have one in my document I regularly update. I should be able to post one soon! Thanks for the suggestion. <3

Thx for the nice comment! <3

This novel is seriously well-written, like, the world the author made is super cool and interesting. It was a little slow in parts for my taste, but that's just me and I'm only 7 chapters in. There were a couple of sentences and word choices that I would've done differently for some extra oomph. But overall? Great read – definitely something different than the usual stuff you see on Webnovel. Cover's nice too. I'm not sure, but I think they made it themselves? 4.6/5 - Has a lot of potential.🤔

While the writing itself could benefit from some polishing, the story manages to be somewhat entertaining despite its predictable nature. It follows a typical storyline with few surprises, but scattered throughout are funny moments that provided a chuckle or two. The 'system' is quite detailed which is evident from chapter 3, an entire chapter dedicated to the different classes. I'm not a huge fan of so much information being thrown at me, but others might be and will likely enjoy it if they like having a lot of statistics in their face in this genre. As a matter of personal preference, I wouldn't have included so much text in the system messages in CAPS or at least tried to give less info on each of the stats and maybe allowed the character to understand them on their own, letting the reader infer how it all kind of works. Overall, it's a light-hearted read that's a bit predictable and full of information, but it's not a bad way to pass the time if you're in the mood for something breezy and easy-going. Chama! 🔥

you'll see

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola