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Lv14

Chaos isn't a pit. Chaos is a ladder. ~Petyr Baelish

2020-09-07 BergabungGermany
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist1d
    Berkomentar

    why again is MC empowering her aswell... isnt she only annoying?

    Even before I could speak, Yuzuru jumped, hearing her, "No way! Onee-chan, I can't let you go on your own! If I'm not there to protect you, then-"
    Eternal Saṃsāra: The Wanderer of Worlds
    Komik · Master4thWall
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist2d
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    please use something like [....] gor system messages, so we can differeniate them from normal text

    Memory unpacking complete
    I'm reborn as Rudeus Greyrat
    Komik · FanFictionForge
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist2d
    Balas Zeke_Arkhadiaxz

    no, you are wrong.

    Nodding, I gathered all my willpower and stopped watching the beautiful ship to get on my horse and set sail for the Red Keep, the place where I had been informed that Varys, the mysterious man who had come from Essos to be the maester of whispers and who had become close friends with the king, had taken the captain of the ship I had fallen in love with. 
    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
    Televisi · Marcia_05
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist2d
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    yes bc Xandar will generously give up their monopoly on the strongest war machine in exstence...

    Everyone knew the news coming from across the narrow sea, and at this point, the existence of dragons in Xandar was more than believable. Knowing that King Aerys might have dragons in his possession unsettled many, as his sanity was already being called into question, and adding a deadly weapon under his control would not be the best way to go.
    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
    Televisi · Marcia_05
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist3d
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    commit su.icide viserys :)

    Viserys could only watch as he thought, 'I've completely destroyed my own family...'
    House of the Dragon: Stars of the Realm.
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist3d
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    why tho... he is the heir... if he kills viserys, he becoms king. He can reason in court that viserys killed the queen, his wife, in cold blood. What are they gonna do? He has Vermithor... He is already undefeatble...

    "You self-centered brat, do you realize what you are doing!?" His voice was angry, not only because of the situation but also because he had just lost moments ago to Aemon. He wanted to challenge him again, but he knew it would be impossible if this brat got himself killed or banished for treason. It was a good thing they had followed Aemon after he ran; he dreaded to think about what would have transpired if they weren't here to at least stop him momentarily. "Think about your sister, Aemon! She will be alone and hurt because of your impulsivity." It was ironic for the people around to hear Daemon say such words, as he was known for his reckless and impulsive demeanor to all. What they didn't know was that most of the time he did those actions on purpose, just to rile people up or to draw their attention to him.
    House of the Dragon: Stars of the Realm.
    Televisi · Evilmoon
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist4d
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    cultivation novel slang takes over😂

    "En!"
    I Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be King
    Derivasi dari karya · Fangrove
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist4d
    Balas Eli_reader

    there is an invincibility potion in minecraft? since when?

    I have a lot of wolves waiting back in the Minecraft World. Forty wolves will be a force to be reckoned with if I put them in the right place.
    I Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be King
    Derivasi dari karya · Fangrove
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist4d
    Balas Jaired_Jeffers

    probably fanmade

    "At least send something that lets me raise my sister! I did not have a pair of tits to feed her!"
    I Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be King
    Derivasi dari karya · Fangrove
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist4d
    Berkomentar

    author really struggles with past and present tense...

    "At least send something that lets me raise my sister! I did not have a pair of tits to feed her!"
    I Only Want to Enjoy Life But My Little Sister Want Me to be King
    Derivasi dari karya · Fangrove
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    SERVANT*

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    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    Bad Grammar + Patreon detected = opinion rejected.

    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    ... LEWRN TO PROOFREAD! like how come it has become mandatory for fanfic authors to create a greedy patreon for their average fictions, while not even having the decency to write with proper grammar?

    A/N: How's the chapter? Give us your opinion. You may well be able to influence future chapters.
    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    first sirved now sirvice... ITS SER*

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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    3rd time already... its served* nor sirved

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    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    still R'hllor, get your facts right!

    - As you command, my king," she nodded and, straightening her back, began to explain. - I was sent by the Lord of Light, R'Glor. And he contacted me personally, which has never happened before. At first I didn't understand the Lord's actions, but now that I've met you in person, I understand why. You are a light from another world. You are the one who will bring salvation. And you are the one who will lead the people of Westeros into the next age. The Age of Man.
    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    ? can we elaborate on that???? If he apparently isnt a drunkard in this fic, how come he is still an incompetent king?

    A drink? Robert Baratheon hasn't had a drink since Lyanna Stark died. I wonder how long before the Seven Kingdoms become Six.
    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    R'hllor*

    And when I came close to the flame, my vision went dark for a moment, and the next moment I was in a void of fire and smoke. Before me was a human silhouette made entirely of flame. Huge. Strong. Magnificent. I couldn't make out any features, but I knew it was him. The Lord of Light, R'Glor.
    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    isnt it R'hllor?

    - R'Glor," the voice answered me a few seconds later. And it said it with great force, and my nose smelled the distinct odor of ash and cinders.
    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
    Komik · Tiir_Rumibul_3715
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  • unknown_daoist
    unknown_daoist5d
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    should become mandatory to proofread: when a certain number of grammar mistakea are made inna chapter the fic gets shadowbanned

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    Game of Thrones: King of Magic
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