I love the wordings.

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo The story is interesting and yeh of course full of mysteries ... first 2 chapters yet there's a lot of questions that needs to be answered.

WERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Nice parenting huh XD

I can sense any sort of foreshadowing here hm

Hmm... interesting

I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author continue writing this story. <3

I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author will continue writing this story. <3

I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author will continue writing this story. <3

First, I want to commend how the author chose to make the synopsis short, yet catchy. Second, the narration is quite short, but I know the author will improve overtime.

The words are easy to read and therefore understandable. The story works well with the narration. One thing is that I am not quite sure if I did analyze the character designing clearly, but anyway the story is good.

Hello, the way the story starts is indeed unique. The asking of brains and you is catchy. Although, I do not as to the manner must be written in pure narration or what, but either way, the most important thing is that it catches the reader's attention.

Good choice of words. The first 3 chapters of the story caught my interest to read more about this novel. Imma going to add this one in my library.

Your concept is interesting. The mage idea is pretty captivating that you wanted to read more of the story. Please see my message in discord. Thank you so much, author.

Oh... this mineral resource sounds really interesting. The synopsis' information about this mineral made it looked lacking,, which captivated the readers to find out more about the story. <3

To be honest, although the synopsis sounds a but cliché, I am still intrigue that the author might have a boom twisted part in the long run. This fact makes the story more exciting of what might happen along the way.

The synopsis is perfect. It is short but it can catch a reader's attention. It does not need to be a dialogue or wat, just putting the readers on a mood to keep reading. <3

Readers will surely love your story. It has good pacing about the sequencing of events and the "scenarios" are not hurtful to read if you know what I mean. <3

After reading this, "RSK, a History student from India- suddenly gets transmigrated to 13th century Jin Dynasty, China." I was awake and wanted to read more because it sounds like the story has an interesting plot and turn twists of events.

The author seemed to bring a new narration style for the readers. Because as I read the story, it is like a diary of one's life. You are like reading a true story and it feels interesting.