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great .. . .!! . .. trdygdruhffiifdyu

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wtf man post chapter

in the previous chapter he told every one is in q condescending

there is nothing such as villains in this world every thing is about intrest . what i am carving is an mc who is intellectual and have some common sense in him and being mediocre is ok but all the stuff of genric mc makes the hole plot rot , genreally in xianxia , few characteristics which you could try on your new novel specially for xianxia 1 ) let him be average not too godly nor too waste of a talent 2) work on the plots 3) intelligent mc who can plot 4) non harem 5) not naive 6) not the same genric plot making the mc same sword cultivator , instead make him bald donkey 😂( a monk ) 7 ) take some ideas from the classical xanxia 8 ) don't invote the already existing xianxia world follow the basic realms, 9 ) let side character have depth 10 ) dont make the whole population dumb

yes it started in a great way but you messed up when you started adding the new cat girl i mean you should start with simple xanxia level of culvation , you messed up overly complecating the characters and not sticking with og the topic is extermly new so there is no need to invate thing . the chatacter devlopment was strangeb

nro get some help ! you are really a sadistic

hello author we dont want haram please specially with that cat it is so wierd 🤮