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You said that chapter 84 was already available on p*treon, but then you said that there are only 30 chapters there. Bro?? 84 - 26 = 30? I'm not going crazy, am I?
Basically, the protagonist appears about to go to Hogwarts for his 4th year, as an exchange student from the US, he has no money, belongings, or memory of anything he should "know" about magic, "his" wand appears to be completely dead to him, just like other wands, he can do magic without it, but doesn't seem to have much energy to do it for long, he also doesn't seem like the type of person who thinks a lot, a bit impulsive, joined the trio of gold almost instantly, and seems to stick around whenever it gets the chance. Other than that, the characters are all very well done, with good grammar and each chapter should last about 5 minutes, maybe longer. For those who are interested in fanfics of this type where the protagonist interacts with the golden trio frequently and wants to join their group, this could be a good story.
Então Carlos faz parte do universo DC? Eu pensava que ele seria de fora e iria pra lá apenas na próxima vida. Bom, essa é a segunda fanfic em que o protagonista é, ou no caso quer ser o presidente do Brasil, na outra foi uma mistura de DC, Marvel e the Boys, infelizmente foi abandonada. Mas tenho esperanças com essa, mesmo que ele não pareça ter nenhum conhecimento prévio da dc
I wonder when, or if Mc will stop being an idiot, there are so many holes in his "reasons" that it's not even funny, he says that being a civilian is safer than being a ninja, so he becomes a ninja, he knows that this is an extremely different universe from the Anime, but it follows the Anime's script as if nothing had happened and everything was the same, regardless of how dangerous the anime is, and this universe seems to be even more dangerous overall, but even so it seems to have only put minimal effort into getting stronger, this is a frustrating Mc.
I'm not going to lie, this left me a little discouraged with the story, giving another character the power to summon anyone from their own world seems quite risky, it also doesn't seem like something that can last long while maintaining coherence. Well, you are the author, good luck dealing with this.
This is the second time that a group of "black men" appears in this Chinese mtl, in both they appear as bandits, someone despicable, or something similar, these are just the first chapters but this and some other factors took away all my desire to read , warn in the description that this is a translation of a Chinese fanfic, at least people will know what to expect from this fic.
So Mc is evil, for being evil, and wants to dominate the world simply because it's something a "villain" would do, if you add his inconstancy in relation to his father, even though he knows perfectly well how he really is, even fully aware of how he cruelly and brutally murdered his mother in front of him shortly after his birth. This is all considering the "role models" he admired in his previous life, ironic considering how he is in his second life. Well, it's not my type of reading.
well, we know why DxD fanfics are so well known, and although this fanfic is doing well, it is extremely slow paced, with short chapters with little content in them, it also takes you a few days to post a new chapter, so it makes sense not to be that popular.