thanks for your advice! if not is a inconvenience for you, please continues mentioned me these errors! your advice are more that welcome!

Thanks for the recommendation, I fix it with that in min!!!🤗🤗🤗

Thank you, I am happy that you like my work! I recently started taking English classes. I hope to get better with time.😁😁😁

Ah, sorry about that. the story was rewritten in its entirety, sorry but the inconvenience that this may cause you, and my suggestion is that you please read it from the beginning. I hope you enjoy it as much or more than the original.

Don't apologize, I don't consider it disrespectful. And although I would love your help in the correction, the truth is that right now I do not have funds to allow it, but thanks for your consideration.

Otra vez, gracias!!! Tus palabras son increíblemente inspiradoras para mi!!!😍😍😍😘

Gracias!! Yo también soy fan a Nalini Singh!!!😍😍🤗

ya era hora!!!!

pobrecitas😈😈

Aquí hay gato encerrado.

Alguien se está ahogando en vinagre😂😂😂

Cada vez me gusta más😍😍

Q tierno!!! Me encanta un hombre fuerte con una faceta dulce😍😍

Sylvia es genial!!! pobre Elliot 😂😂😂😂

Interesante y absorvente!!!

Me encanta!! Algo diferente, donde la prota no sea una Barbie, xD!!!

sorry but I dont understand

Try again please😌😌😌

sorry!! I don't know what happened but I'm going to post it again, I hope that will solve it.😅😅😅

Hi!! If you could tell me which one is to fix it, I will appreciate it, although it is also due to the translation. Once I translated it into English, many things turned out differently.