Shameless review by the shitty author. I only started writing recently, and I hope that others will cut me some slack. English is not my first language. And I also know that the first chapter/s is very janky to read. So please bear with it for the time being.
At first i thought i wouldn't like this novel, but now that i read some early chapters i think i like it, the writing is good the world and character design as well, overall i highly recommended this novel.
Just a shameless review from the author so please don't mind this review, and please review and point out my mistakes i want to know the mistakes that i made in my book. Thank You
You sure you're not a professional?, well this story is really well written with a non human protagonist that makes it even more interesting, the difference between characters with the background design, i hope that this novel become successful one day.
Your novel is one of the most interesting novels that I read so far in my opinion, the story telling and the world background is good, with 70 plus chapters that is already released that we the viewers and readers can read.
Even though i just read a couple of chapters i see it as an interesting story, from your unique story telling, to your world and character design was good on my opinion and the rest like updating stability, overall it have made me interested.
Even just from the first chapter it was really interesting, from the background of the world in the story to your character design was good with your stable updates, overall 5 star
The story development is good, the writing was detailed and both the character design and background is also good, with a lot of chapters completed, overall it was great
False Idols and Other Short Stories - Expanded Edition
From your writing and character design, is good, the background like the sand dunes in the first chapter was detailed, and also the story development throughout the story was good, overall its fantastic 5 stars for you.
The story was great, the people's in the story and the background is good but do take note that some of your writing is a little off, but the rest is good.