You can use grammarly

Bro if you ruin your novel with harem. I will change my religion every week and curse you in every religion

This novel is good. Ahahahah author always thinks story is too slow. But its perfect, thats the difference between bad webnovels and ur novel, its going good. But i there is something i dont like : WHY HE DONT GO psychiatrist ABOUT HİS NİGHTMARES, AND HE İS CHOOSİNG TO KİLL ALL NAKS ! But thats okey mate ur going great, but dont make mc stronger than all of noble families’s children

HAHAAA, THATS WHAT İ WANT TO SEE

Wait is this academy is only academy in the world ? Bro if its like that you destroyed your novel

author, can i ask you why you always tell us mc is selfish. ok we got this so stop

Wow He didnt even think about there is magic in real world

YOUR NOVEL LOOKS GOOD. READ MY NAME! AND DONT RUİN YOUR NOVEL

Aah, thats it, when he does a achievement goddess gives him something to make it easy( sorry for bad england)

Yes! Everything in the universe SHOULD BE NAMED JACK!

He needed this a little earlier ahahahahahha

He was dead 5 minutes ago too

That details was good and necessary. Dont try to use them too much

We have a weapon master here

No no dont do that its not realistic that he is the only one who trains.

I really know that feeling. I was interested in lucid dreaming and some nights i dreaming but really i feel like real life so its hard. (Sorry for bad england )

Please dont make mc op

İts good dont ruin it with making mc op

İts going good please dont ruin it with making mc overpowered

Hey, author here. im just supporting my own novel. if you have misunderstandings after reading chapter 1 john is not main character. please write rewievs so i can improve myself.