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Awesome story, author-san! Was hooked right from the beginning. When I finished it, I really craved for more. I was also a little peeved that there werent any more chapters. I would definitely support this novel to the end, author-san. Anyway, the plot was awesome and deep research had went into making it. A huge winner in my book. The background was so cool and they were defined so perfectly. The side-characters were truly alive and I wish you would flesh them out more. All of this differentiates this book from the thousands of others. This is definitely going to succeed. I'm betting on it, author-san.

Now, this is a story worth reading. Unlike all the system novel, it doesnt start straightaway with a system and there is a much needed background to the MC. I also like the grounded-reality of the whole novel. A definite five-star novel in my opinion. Best of luck, author-san. I would definitely like to see much more of this novel.

Thanks for your information. Will check it out immediately. It was only a minor inconvenience but still I am glad that there is a chapter explaining it. Thanks a lot

Okay, got it! Thanks for clarifying. Will check it out immediately!

The story is awesome! There are many stories which have the same betrayal and time travel thingies but this is an original. I liked it and was thoroughly engrossed. There is a need for proofreading but other than that, the story is very fine. Would definitely recommend it to others. There is however one thing that confused me. From the first two chapters, it is abundantly clear that the MC Eden knew of the Chains of Dedra, which from this chapter has something to do with torture and the release of a super powerful dude. So, if MC Eden travelled back in time, how did he not know the existence of these three men who are out to capture him? Hmmm.... I think there is some clear mismatch here and would like author-san to correct it. Anyway, I wholeheartedly think this is an honest mistake and wouldnt pay too much mind to it. Author-san, best of luck and please dont stop writing.

Now this is a little confusing. From the first two chapters, it is abundantly clear that the MC Eden knew of the Chains of Dedra, which from this chapter has something to do with torture and the release of a super powerful dude. So, if MC Eden travelled back in time, how did he not know the existence of these three men who are out to capture him? Hmmm....

fired.... what kind of a name is it? Wouldnt it be confusing if someone says 'HEY, YOU'RE FIRED!' Is he stating the obvious, i.e., his name or is he firing him from his job?

So an unknown entity gifted the system to MC and the system is gifting something else to the MC. Sounds like a good deal to me. Where can I get such a system?

So... who gifted the system to MC? A god?

A system actually wishing the MC happy birthday. This is a joke, right? How can there be such a good system? I must be dreaming....