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Excuse me, is there anything I can do to keep the sentences from merging with each other? It's very uncomfortable to read. Thanks.

yes, they are very uncomfortable and, excuse the expression, annoying.

Очень интересно, но хотелось чтобы главы выходили чаще. Спасибо автору за такой интересный фанфик)).[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It's very interesting, I'm looking forward to continuing.

Thanks for the chapter.

you write this story very well, I look forward to continuing.

The fanfiction is good, it's just that the situation in which MS found herself is a little unpleasant to read, but everything is fine. You did well).

can he make his tears heal as well as the phoenix's tears, thanks to his eyes? It would be an interesting addition to his abilities.

can you drop the link to the original or or to the page where you posted more chapters? Please, I would appreciate it.

thanks for the chapter