Pa_Kou_Vang_2095

I think he was the guy from the other lifetime with the her that created the space.

Everything is wonderfully written . Can’t wait to read more. It draws you in right from the beginning and now there’s been some twists. Loving every moment. Please hurry up and post more chapters .

It was a great book. Loved it!! I wanted to hear more about the little girl from her vision and what else they were going to do to grown humanity but overall, everything was good.

Sometimes the names were wrong. There were some translations that was confusing . Not sure is the Master of Chaoyan was a guy or a girl. Was waiting for reunion of her n her master. Overall, it was good that she was able to destroy all her enemies and she was able to retire at the end there.

When will you update?? Love your book so far… need more!!

Chapters 150-159 are repeats. I want credits for those chapters

Healing

Great story line. No cliff hangers. Hardly had any grammatical errors. Everything wrapped up nicely at the end. Great job author!

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

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