Taehi_li
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This is super entertaining, I just hope that you give rhaenyra the ability that Dany has like the power to revive the fossilized dragon eggs and the ability to be immune to any fire, you can give a little extra like fire magic or blood magic from Old Valyria as Aemon has a warrior template while rhaenyra has the mage temple. Overall your story is super entertaining I hope you continue writing and not drop this amazing fanfic.
This fanfiction on young justice has very good potential, I love how you made the mc a clone of martian manhunter and black canary though from what's written right now all he got from black canary is his looks, not her powers, though if you ever thought about giving him sound-related powers you can just give him sound manipulation, you can reason that his inherited powers from black canary mutated because of his high mental prowess, I would also like for you to create more chapters where the team will get more bonding time, overall this fanfic is fantastic I can't wait for new chapters, some incredible fanfics just get abandoned by their authors so I hope that you'll be able to at least make 150 chapters.
here's the Father
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