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it started tame, i'd say even a little bit refreshing as its a unique story idea (kind of) but it all went downhill for me when he "touched" the commander while she was asleep (that sounds like sexual assault to me) and to make it even worse when she woken up she started searching for who did that to her even if she "enjoyed" it in her sleep, this shit appeals to rape fantasies and I do not have such fantasies.
the last paragraphs made me do backflips to relieve myself from the cringe
what how theres no mirror to check your face
he got robbed in broad daylight out of his body
so she want to get beaten into submission
the story is mid, the characters are mid, the system is mad annoying and cringe + the story has incest which is a big nono, the mc is cringe. The story feels like it was written for teens in heat with twisted fantasies.
idk if its the grammar or the wording but im having a stroke reading this (perhaps im just retarted)
did bro just finesse someone out of their body?