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UndeadBeing

UndeadBeing

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There's a high chance I'm going to insult you... Another big chance is I'm gonna write an essay to you on why I hate you and your ideals.

2020-08-06 BergabungUnited States
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing22d
    Berkomentar

    This is the dumbest argument ever

    "Joker as you know him would have been exterminated on sight. Why you keep him alive is beyond us so we see you as a failure. A man just as insane as Joker." 
    The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
    Komik · A_Real_Werewolf234
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing26d
    Balas YellowNarwhale

    Ok, randomly remove romance from a romance novel and call it romance. Stupid right? Human form is human, not a dragon or a wolf, there’s no reason to do that in a specifically non-human novel unless you truly don’t care why your story is being read. Don’t reply to me after this, I’d rather not talk to a degenerat.

    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasi · Nilo_A
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing26d
    Balas SkyNeves

    You misspelled “Your” and called me ”Mentally Oppressive” you’re the type of idiot who reads the thing

    Jiraiya quickly went into his apartment while Tsunade was still stunned, but after he closed his door, she blushed furiously as she went home while calling Jiraiya all sorts of names.
    Naruto: The Strongest Senju
    Komik · Kingkillerdj2023
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing3mth
    Balas BlueCactusE

    No, but your body burns fat while asleep to continue functions, so either she won't be able to sleep at all or she'll die in her sleep.

    Su Xiaolu fell asleep again, mainly because she felt hungry, but there was definitely nothing to eat at this time. She decided that she should sleep, as she would not be hungry in her sleep.
    Transmigrated As A Delicate Bundle Of Luck For A Farming Family
    Sejarah · Skin White As Snow
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing3mth
    Balas Zailo95

    Yeah, I swear half of my moments are forgetting have the rest the other half of my achievement.

    He wore a blue tracksuit with earphones on as he looked at the humongous gate, his thoughts were 'wow, how rich is this school, and why are they wasting money like this?' His heart ached as he remembered they were about 7 of such miniature cities, he truly was saddened by it.
    MHA: The Lazy Hero
    Komik · ImAGhost
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas YellowNarwhale

    You’re the only one buddy, I’m not writing a novel, for the one person who likes that particular type, for free.

    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasi · Nilo_A
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas Kw0z

    I’ve seen no-harem members complain but they’ve never spammed no harem in the reviews like the filthy harem readers much like yourself. Your novels are trash plain and simple, get off the site we don’t like you

    First Stygian Diviner:Apocalypse
    Fantasi · Isaac_black
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas YellowNarwhale

    How do you like a novel that’s advertised as non-human but he has a human form? That’s the dumbest plot ever, do you also like your romance novels to have no romance? Or maybe you like your transmigration novels to have no transmigration? See how stupid that sounds? If you make a non-human mc and advertise it as such, you keep it non-human.

    The Black Necromancer
    Fantasi · Nilo_A
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas DaQuan_Lee
    Immortal Wanderer
    Fantasi · Sumdud
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Berkomentar
    I'm not sure how you Fraudkuna fans are coping after the amount of Ls, he's been taking recently, all you on some good copium
    Honoured One of Young Justice
    Komik · Honoured_Writer
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas Houraji

    odd, for me your message isn't there and this is what I see:

    Sin of Kin
    Fantasi · Houraji
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas Houraji

    I understand that you've replied but then deleted your reply, is it possible for just a yes or no? I'd prefer to know this thing before I read a book, not just because of my dislike of the common troupe of fmc = yuri, because the story is vastly different with just that one addition.

    Sin of Kin
    Fantasi · Houraji
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing4mth
    Balas

    Dude if you’re gonna be an idiotic harem lover atleast be able to make proper sentences. Nothing about the choices is a part of why I hate harems, you’re just used to being able to pick what girls you can use. You idiots always act like we’re mad about the women but also prove why we hate harems, because you just proved you view women as an object rather than a partner in a relationship

    Reincarnated in demon slayer as a uchiha.
    Komik · Ppp_Pppp
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Balas Unpaid_FoxGod

    Crimson Monarch: Endless Journey and Naruto: Forced to marry Naruto’s mother at the beginning. Lying to an elder’s messenger and reading harem novels. Your fate is sealed

    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Komik · akikan40
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Balas Unpaid_FoxGod

    I see you’ve been reading harem novels. You’re no longer welcome in the no harem sect

    My Stepsister in Kyoto
    Komik · akikan40
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Diterbitkan

    This is one of those stories where the author doesn’t bother to write about the actual story until after premium chapters. We got 1 chapter of the mc before switching to another character until after the free chapters are done and the author can now get paid. Btw the excuse “background was important” is trash, I don’t remember much of the background you wasted our time with and I still followed the rest of the story. This is the trashy pay-to-win author type. Not worth ya time and or money/fast passes to read, poison tester has decided this is indeed poison

    Immortal Wanderer
    Fantasi · Sumdud
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Diterbitkan

    I don’t care if it’s bad, it could be one word per chapter but the fact it’s no harem and starts in dxd deserves a 5 star, people complain that because dxd is a harem story there should be harem yet they want mha harems, Naruto harems, marvel and dc harems, and other no harem stories to have harems. All them harem lovers that defend or ask for harem are part of the ever growing problem of webnovel. The brainless harem lovers don’t seem to realize it’s not their novel and have a million other trash(harem) to read on this site, click on a random book and odds are it’s harem, they have access yet they want more.

    Dimensions May Die(Devil May Cry)
    Komik · TheFanBoy
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Balas Kamon772

    Of course, so here is my response and reply’s: First I am aware of Cruz being just a random male character, by controlling I meant Ragni immediately forcing them to act in ways they normally wouldn’t. I have read each chapter that was free beside the two unlock ones that are strewn in between(which I fast passed.) Second, I would suggest the app or website grammarly, the free version is great and the paid is extra. Third, I was talking about the scene/chapter after Ragni gets out of the hole, you had Ragni’s pov, the twins, and the attacker. It comes across more repetetively when you space them across different chapters. Lastly, what I mean by “the main character seemingly changes, that or we get a new character out of the blue” is that when you went to switch pov’s you didn’t give us a clear warning, it was also never communicated that were multiple Leads. Something like changing i between them during the traveling in the wild, it would be easier to ease the leads together and we wouldn’t be thrown into a different setting in the blink of an eye. The main issue of the multiple leads is that while it’s cool to have multiple, a good amount was purely the twins and ragni, time passed, training with Ragni, stopping in town, finding a tattoo on Ragni. So if you were reading this, what you would see is a bunch of chapters being purely about the 3 present leads and then out of nowhere a day passes and we have new leads for some reason and the twins are gone for awhile. There was no clear knowledge of the multiple leads or pov switches and it just seemed thrown together. The multiple leads and the multiple perspective viewpoints don’t have a warning or any indicator. A good example would be:[attacker] POV. You put that in the same chapter of the other pov and then we have clear knowledge that there’s a switch in pov’s

    Summoned to be a Weapon
    Fantasi · Kamon772
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Balas Houraji

    Quick question, is this yuri? I’m hoping not but if you could just let me know that would be nice

    Sin of Kin
    Fantasi · Houraji
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  • UndeadBeing
    UndeadBeing5mth
    Diterbitkan

    It’s an alright novel, good idea and execution. The world is set out great. A few problems though, the male lead is honestly a little too controlling. The twins are nice. I’m gonna be honest, while I enjoyed the book, it’s not worth paying money, the sentence structure, grammar, and chapter setup is bad, one scene repeated twice, went to a different scene, then repeated the scene and finally moved on. Constant misspellings and the main character seemingly changes, that or we get a new character out of the blue. So I’d give most of it 5s besides writing quality, story development, and obviously update stability. I’d suggest if you’re looking for a random novel to just check out for 40 chapters read it, but if you’re looking for a novel worth investing your time and or money then find something else. Great story but I also have to be fair here

    Summoned to be a Weapon
    Fantasi · Kamon772
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