Come and give this book a review! I need 10 for a general rating. My later chapters are where it's at in terms of quality, but I will be improving my earlier chapters to optimize the reading experience!

:3

Yo, can I help you refine and edit some of these chapters? Contact me on discord if yes.

As a small-time writer, i am often disappointed when Seeing these advertisements. I know the reviews are essential for a story with less thAn 10, but it just hurts my pride...

noice

I feel like your writing style would be better in past-tense

Instead of leaving your side note directly inside your book, you can use the author's note that appears at the end of your chapter when in editing mode. just an FYI

and thus begins the exposition dump