PureBlood404
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yeah, how do they find such errors when the author himself can't find it.
for the first one, i am sorry, English isn't my native language and I have a lot to learn. the second one, I edited it and I think it's better now third one, yeah I will try, I mean I think it doesn't give the impact it gives if I break the paragraph, I will try in upcoming chapters don't worry you aren't rude, and thank you for your constructive criticism it helps me a lot