First of all, let me make it clear that I am the one who writes every single line of main characters in this novel. It's insulting to assume that an AI generated it. If you had actually tinkered with AI yourself, you'd know that it's not possible to generate an entire story or every line of my novel and have it make sense. The interactions between characters and the development of my own world and characters are something only I, as the author, can create. Yes, I do use AI for proofreading and polishing my work, just like many other authors use human editors. I'm only human, and I might miss some typos and grammatical errors. I use AI as a tool to help me present my story in the best possible light, but the story itself comes from my imagination, not some soulless algorithm. As for your claim that AI could generate my novel, I'd like to point out that even if such technology existed, it would be prohibitively expensive, and the result would still be soulless. If my novel were indeed AI-generated, I'm sure many more readers would have complained by now. Yet, so far, you're the only one with this issue. Thank you.

Okay, I understand you bro...

Only the young one, but yeah, haha 😅

It's his grandpa.

A good idea, but it will take several years before Michael was able to kill the four heads of the four mafia families. It was a bit long for the MC that he might as well grow his family naturally.

Lorenzo:

Beauty and attraction are ageless, and just because he's a mature soul doesn't mean he's immune to it. Don't expect him to act like a decrepit old man who's lost all zest for life

Good idea.

Sorry, I didn't know what you've gone through. But can you really blame me? Leaving such a review made me a bit mad as well. But yeah, sorry for your loss.

Your definitely butthurt, there's no point in denying it. Most other readers simply provide their PS without any fuss because they genuinely want to continue the novel and show their support. Given the number of people reading it, reaching the top 30 is not an unrealistic goal. Yet here you are, leaving a spiteful review and urging others to stay away from my novel.

I'll see if it fits with the narrative I had in mind.

Of course.

Ok

With his status in mind, living for two hundred years is no problem.

Lorenzo VS FBI.

Read carefully, her age was 14 when Noodles was jailed, and two years have gone by, so she's already around 16/17, which is the same age as the mc.

She's the same age as Lorenzo, if you read carefully. Her name is Deborah from Once Upon A Time in America, and actually, the novel timeline is a bit different, or else, if it's the movie's timeline, she would have been older than the mc.

Lorenzo:

Since you so graciously advised others to "stay away from this novel," I'm going to take your advice and kindly ask you to do the same. It seems like we both would be much happier that way. It's commendable that you're willing to support your beloved Percy Jackson novel, but that doesn't give you the right to be stingy with your support. And if you cannot show the same enthusiasm for mine, I must respectfully decline your "support." It's simple, really, if you only want to support one novel, there's no need to waste your time and energy on mine. I can already anticipate your reply, something along the lines of "I'll never touch your trash again." To that, I'd like to say, "I'm glad. Please keep your negativity away from my work and the readers who genuinely enjoy it." You see, I'd rather have supportive readers who genuinely enjoy my work than those who only bring negativity.