BlackFluteofLove

The plot of the story seems really promising and the 'Covid' really got me hooked as it intrigued my curiosity. The riverdog seems pretty interesting and the Darkmen himself is really an interesting character. This is a good read. I would live to find out what happens further in the story. Cheers to the author! Keep writing!

Pleasure was mine! 😁

The descriptions are insane! I got goosebumps while reading. The stories are really really good and the creatures are really really creepy! I wish this collection gets the attention it definitely deserves. There are some grammatical errors and after fixing them this would really make a great novel! Kudos to the author! Keep writing, You really have the skills.

This is sooo good I really can't put it down!! The author is really creative and has the perfect skills. The synopsis is not that hooking but the chapters are really really interesting. I really can't wait to find out what happens next. I've saved this and will continue reading. Kudos to the author for the perfectly crafted work!

hehe... But be careful as Mia isn't really a baby girl 😝

that's great!

The way the author plays with word is just mind-blowing. When I read from the table of contents that this story has a chapter 0 I was amused but after reading it, I was grinning from ear to ear. And then the Ch 1 was just awesome. I fell in live with the way the author narrates the story. This is a commendable work. Cheers to the author! Keep writing! I really want to read more of your work.

Charlie is such a d!ck. Anyhow, the story is such an amazing read I can't put it down. The title is intriguing and the synopsis is good, but it could be better. There are some grammatical errors which are okay, as the story is great. But if they are taken care of then this would be a commendable work! Great job for this amazing plot author. Cheers! Keep writing!

I think the author has done fair enough in sketching out the characters. The synopsis gets the sympathy from the readers and will hook them in reading this. The story seems promising and the first person narrative, kinda, gives it a personal touch which is appreciable. I would like to request just one thing from the author, and that is please punctuate the paragraphs before publishing as without them the story seems to be running around. I mean, I don't like hurried things so it would be great if you could use some breathers in this. Otherwise a very fine and interesting read. Keep Writing author. Cheers to you!

This is completely hooking right from the synopsis. The line 'bruises under the clothes' that's really something which makes the readers to connect with the character's feelings. Although I have read just a few chapters but I already hate Mr. and Mrs. Tylor for being cruel with the MC. A great job Author! Cheers to you! Keep writing!