Comic as comedy, both means funny, it's not a wrong word.

yup, it's Nyaruko-chan.

Who doesn't, hahaha. I would love to have one, not joking here.

But which one? *laughs*

Pokémon, if you are confused.

It's not that I can't reproduce him. It's just not necessary to always reproduce a character like Whitebeard. Also, I think you have a misconception of who you call Whitebeard. He's not always the ego-filled, confident, fearless person you think he is. Whitebeard knows perfectly well that he is but one man, and he is fully aware of his own mortality! Moreover, he does not want to endanger his family. He is not afraid of death, but he is afraid of not seeing his family's future. After all, the future for him is young people, pirates like Ace, Thatch, Marco. He wants to see them fly away, but they stay with him since he is their father.

No, she was looking all this time Hisashi.

Oh, no problem. I never thought of it as a complaint, but simply as a suggestion or an idea of your own. In any case, thank you for giving my story a chance!

He doesn't have the chakra system developed enough for training chakra, not because he is a civilian and he did not go to ninja school at the beginning. My mc went into that world when the original body was already 17, not when he was small. This means that it's not like he doesn't want to train his chakra. He simply can't. (at least in my settings)

I wrote clearly about this, even more than one time. Devil Fruits gets stronger with the stronger physical strength and the understanding of the fruit. He was not doing the first set, but he was working on the second one. As I said, slowly be he was doing that.

If you don't like my story, then I can't do much. Thanks for reading it, but I will not change how I write. If you want a better chat group, there are many more here in webnovel and other sites. Or if you expected something more "erotic," then this is not for you.

Everyone has their own preferences, and I don't force you to read. I prefer that style of writing for chat groups because it definitely makes it more comical, this is my opinion. Thanks for giving it a chance.

Hahaha!

You are not helpful, have they ever told you? Your tone of voice is not nice. He wasn't in that world for 16 years. He was in that world for a FEW days. Second, I know I will get blacklist. Still, I don't care right now about rankings or power stones. If I cared, I would not have put them. I like expressing myself with kaomoji, especially in chat groups; they are so damn useful! And why would they find out, are you the writer? Sorry for this frankness, but it's true. I never decided that they will find out he is weak, I repeat I never decided that, and they will not. So I repeat, calm your inner fire down.

He is working, at his own pace but he is doing that. the workload of Guy is too heavy for an ordinary person like him. Not to mention, he did not give up that opportunity, Guy lives basically next to him, he has all the time to learn from him. What he wants to do now is to understand the fruit better, physical thing comes next, and for physical, it will be really, really soon.

Might Guy training is not something he can do for now. Don't worry, soon Hisashi will not be this useless.

Just checked, you are right, I don't know why but on phone the 5th chapter did not update, thanks for informing me about this!

I edited the 5th chapter when I rewrote the 6th chapter, now Hisashi doesn't know Kurenai anymore.

It's a chat group. It needs to have unreasonable elements in it. Not to have serious elements in it. I already made the mistake of making things more "real" in a chapter, more sentimental, and regretted it instantly. I'm not new to writing. You can tell from how I write, my English, my management. I even have an ff I wrote as a try here on wn. Not to mention all the things I wrote for myself only. I don't get mad, I happily accept criticism, and it helps me a lot too. So don't worry. I hope I replied to your comment in full. What you said with your comment is good, but I want to exaggerate it since I am creating a chat group. Otherwise, I wouldn't have written a chat group. A too serious chat group can become boring faster than a comical one, not to mention I'm trying to mixing both elements in it, without it going to collide with each other.

This is a good idea, will keep it in mind for a possible future event, thanks for this suggestion. For the second thing, yes you are right, Othinus for Waifu!!!