LadyLipstick
π€π€π€π€« I really can't write fluffy romance. D*mn it.
Tulisan
membaca
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Membaca buku-buku
Oops. Typo. π€¦π»ββοΈπ
Oh yeah. typo π I'll go fix β΅(ΰΉΒ―β‘Β―ΰΉ)
I'm shamelessly giving my story a 5 again after I deleted my previous review π Btw, I placed that previous review in an auxiliary chapter π Anyways, this story started out smutty. Like, there are plenty smut in the opening chapters. However, as the story progressed, smut and R-18 scenes are often only found here and there. As much as I want to say that smut chapters can be skipped, it seems like they can't, since oftentimes, if not all, there are dialogues that are part of the story development. π
First of all, I feel honored that someone wrote a different version of my story π I really don't know how to write smut, how to go about it. I don't know how to write it (or any scene in general for that matter) in a "colorful" way that's why my writing is more direct and like a semi-script, but this author managed to do it. Kudos to you author! You write better than me π I enjoyed reading even though there're only 2 chapters released. Please do continue!! I want to read more!! π