Seth_Shovan

so we have a garden conprising of a tree a vine and 2 bush like plants

I mean i get it your trying to build emotional connection between these characters and while that is fine I'm running into the issue of staying with the story it's a story about a Greek myth and so far the upload schedule while not bad isn't substantial to keep attention to the story and while you have a good concept and story on paper it's stagnating in these side stories that take up the 1 chap a day and in the end we get no progress in meeting what was in the synapses Athena regretting her actions Poseidon being well zeuses brother and medusas rejections of them both in favor of whom she moved onto I feel like the story is moving waaaayyy to slow for the Chap size and upload schedule

didn't the mc admit to serafall that he set up ajuka and Azazel in said contest?

wasn't it already stated he can't stuff living being into this little pocket dimention

this book is really good all around all that i see is that it needs a set update schedule. the world building is good and the the characters are memorable please keep up the good work author

hey hadies if you see a blood god come through make sure to give him the best treatment

Im loving this webnovel please keep it up

count the number of times daemon is said in this paragratph

it's alright highschool of the dead is bland anyway in comparison due to this being about ei's essence but no way is it possible to incorporate it into that world

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