Very good so far, a little slow at the start, but picks up. Happy to see where this story is going and can't wait to read more. Try reading it too!

Jung Hyun is still such an interesting name tbh

Kinda hoping they do but i know its not going to happen

A good chap

Im fairly sure the throat is a vital spot no?

Exactly, he has a higher sense of duty than the people that actually run what he wants to protect

A little long, but decent first chap[img=fp]

Sadly how it works

Respectfully XD

You're right and thank you for spotting these mistakes. Nobody tells me things I can improve on or anything. Much appreciated :)

Of course, in time

An interesting novel to say the least. The drama is there, the attitude is there, and the boldness is there(most of the time). It all makes a funny and interesting reading experience. I also feel the direction of this novel can bring something new. So best of luck writing!

I feel like this'll be an interesting stay

So aggressive its great

Creepy but perhaps foretelling?

dutchess hearing seems to be on vacation

seems to be going somewhere interesting

Yes.

So he's enrolling in the acedemy? I thought he was king already?