bombguy02_YT

I am quite impressed with the web novel that was created by the author. Story and the characters are good. Considering that English isn't the author's first language, I am impressed, learning a second language can be hard. The one thing that needs to improve on is the Synopsis. The synopsis tells you what this book is about and is something that catches your eyes. It makes the reader curious about the book. The first part of the Synopsis is great. The second part is the reason to improve. The reason why is don't write volume 1 in the sentence. Describe the story, background, character, timeline, plot, etc. But don't make it too detailed and don't make it a summary. keep the Synopsis moderate and simple while appealing to the audience. Overall, good job. -bombguy02yt