Mandatory Author Review! I appreciate everyone who reads this. I have read so many novels that I ran out of good stories to read. I wanted to write this story illustrating many facets of novels that I felt were missing when I read them. I hope that my image of what is cool and exciting resonates within you as well. The story is told from a 1st person perspective which may be hard to read. But I hope that increases the immersion you feel and the connection to our main character, Kael. I will do a minimum of one chapter per day. Hoping to get atleast 500-600 chapters done before the ending of the story. Please write any recommendations you may have they would all be greatly appreciated. This journey will be filled with many emotions, but I do want to give a small spoiler. Our main character is ruthless to his enemies and to those that treat him with respect and honor he treats with kindess. The world is extremely large. Large enough that their will be endless death and killing. Unless our protagonist can do something about it. Thank you for reading my brainchild. If this novel does well, I'll re-do my original cultivation story.

trash

the story would be much better if the quality of the writing wasn't on the same level as a 5 year old. a good example of this would be how the author spells 'battle' as 'battel'. no capitalization for a majority of sentences. random and pointless plot points introduced for no reason. overall this novel is written by someone who has no grasp of the english language or storytelling.

low rate trash MC is braindead. plot makes little to no sense, the author didn't explain whatsoever on how or why he was reincarnated to another timeline. some people do gene experiments on him when hes a cripple, and for some reason he magically wakes up as a retarded god. waste of time

Would you prefer something like Long Wu? Or Wang Du. Or how about any of these surnames that appear in EVERY BOOK.. WANG LI ZHANG LIU CHEN YANG HUANG ZHAO WU ZHOU nationalist L

chaps are way too short author is milkin this for $$$ which is kinda disappointing

what is the point of this??? zzzz

Bro; you can barely right correct grammar. This history lesson seems above your paygrade

HE HE HE HIM HIM NOT SHE ASLKDJASLKDAS

'Adriel counted around 30 zombies in the vicinity, the closest to him being only a few meters away.

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What caught 'His' eye

Assign two attribute points to Strength ***

"Okay, okay... Let me take a deep breath and calm down." Idk if english is your first language or not but a lot of small grammar mistakes could be fixed. It would improve the quality of this writing by 10000% Really interesting so far regardless. I love the apocalypse!

only here. where else should i post this on?

hehe, I'll get around to changing it. Didn't even notice honestly lol!

Thank you!!!!

hehe. i enjoyed writing this part too thanks for reading :D

Cool twist on a normal world. Kind of an odd theme to write about, but it is original and cool. Im more of a mans man. So the whole feminine thing really is not my cup of tea. Id assume this would be a great novel for those that have those tastes tho! Great writing and plotline! Excellent detail and deep characters!

thank you for the kind words <3