Caesar_of_Oedon
Sort-of anonymous writer working on a passion novel. My discord is: "Caesar_of_Oedon#6263" if you have any specific questions. Happy reading, y'all! :]
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Caesar_of_Oedon3mthBerkomentarGuess it makes sense. I’d want to repent if I invented that too.
I scoffed at him. "No silly invention of mine is going to hold me down now that I'm free." I turned to the boys behind me. "Listen here, I won't tell you what to do, but I'm going to trust these people. Maybe you should too."- Caesar_of_Oedon3mthBerkomentar"That's racist."
- Caesar_of_Oedon5mthBerkomentar
I don’t believe you
It All Started With a Lightning - Caesar_of_Oedon5mthBerkomentar
Hopefully the punctuation gets better. This is two to three sentences at least.
'Ow that really fucking hurts not having a physical body has almost made me forget how bad pain can be I cannot believe that this stupid ferret is beating me right now.' - Caesar_of_Oedon5mthBerkomentar
We’re gonna need some punctuation here chief
'Here we go one two three death from above.' - Caesar_of_Oedon11mthBerkomentarA/N: Without any milk…
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarHe had far more scars just on his face than I could count, namely due to the fact that many of them overlapped each other. Not a speck of hair was on his discolored face, but it was clear that the scars were to blame. Had that not been the case, his chiseled jawline and strong brow would have made him quite handsome, but they only served to increase his intimidating figure now.
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarFinally, with the moonlight, Alfred could see the man's features. A middle-aged man with a scruffy beard and unkempt black hair, standing around about 1.80 meters tall with a noticeably athletic build stood in front of him. Despite the change in scenery, those yellow eyes still stared at him like a cat.
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarI stood up and shook my head a few times. Much better.
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarAlfred is a small, almost ghastly boy with blonde hair leaning towards white (all probably side effects of malnourishment). His skin was deathly pale, almost enough to see his veins (he only knows this because he could see them before, his complexion improved over the four months). There was only one thing more eye catching than his straight golden locks, and that were his eyes. They look bejeweled.
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarI kept my gaze straight ahead, my voice even and hollow as I walked past her and down into the inn, barely flicking a glance at her. "Let's get ready, we have a guild to exterminate."
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentar
Bro said:
He then stormed out of the studio, with cameras following him, until he was out of reach. - Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentar
one-of-a
A one-in-a-kind ability! - Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentar
Bro… it tactic….
El Diablo only had one rule and that was to never do something that would result in him losing money. Bill changed his tac-tic midway and decided to launch powerful attacks with the hope of killing Mako once and for all but he was defeated in the end. - Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentar
I also THRUST for power
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarParagraf ini telah dihapus.
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrBerkomentarLiving hell
- Caesar_of_Oedon1yrDiterbitkan
Insane. Crazy. Bonkers. Genius. The writing quality alone blows me away. Next to no confusing or unecessarily long sentences/paragraphs, along with nearly nonexistent info dumps. And through all this, the author manages to make the characters deep and believable in accordance to their age. Even if you don’t like fan-fics (which I usually don’t), this reads like an original novel. Fans of the original HP books will be satisfied with the interpretations, and with the changes. Personally, I believe that the changes made have almost always enhanced the story and seem entirely natural. Also, if you haven’t read the books, or only did so in passing, or just watched the movies, you won’t find a lack of explanation (at least, I didn’t pick up on something that came from left field, although I’m a pretty big fan of HP so I may have filled in the blanks). Overall, 5 stars off the board. I haven’t read the other story this author has published, but I’ve read that this quality is to be expected. Keep up the good work.