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Eman_Santil

Eman_Santil

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2020-06-02 BergabungUnited States
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  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
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    really good chapter is Korra gonna be the love interest or who? you should have him make a wing suit and he can use the steambending from the air to push him to keep in the air next you should have learn some form of martial art also once he get a high enough mastery over blood bending are you gonna have him be able to control the sword to fly like yadu from guardians of the Galaxy and also extend you should also have him practice throwing needles and ninja stars that he can make out of ice

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  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Berkomentar

    can you have him use a bident

  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Balas LesserCodex

    are you uploading somewhere else or when you gonna add a another chapter

  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Balas maxphantom

    go read the beginning of chapter 29

  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Balas maxphantom

    did you not read the earlier chapter magic is slowly coming back to that world so it won't matter soon also since your gonna be bringing magic in the world you should bring in gates from another world to bring monster and other people like elves and ects and when he more powerful he can claim the thrown with the crown

  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Balas LesserCodex

    please tell me you didn't drop the story

  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Berkomentar

    and you should make a space and time sword like virgl sword but he'll be able to make miniature hyperbolic time chamber to help him train

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  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
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    for his next sword he should make a training/enlightenment sword that help speed up training he does with it around like say he used it while practicing a new sword technique and said technique would have took him 4 month to be able to use it battle but with the sword I would take a week at most and the enlightenment part would just help him come up with more ideas to use it or improve it all together also another use would be say was thinking of making something like a new sword or technique but couldn't come up with something with the sword it would help him come up with one faster

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  • Eman_Santil
    Eman_Santil2 years ago
    Berkomentar

    you should make a chainsaw sword and when he transform with it he gets chainsaw man armour

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