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Now this is very good. I’m still a bit confused about the character’s personality dynamic but still enjoy it. X is really wierd though.

Damn autocorrect.

Doesn’t have a BD implant or a physical phone to record.

Sometimes I look at this book and think why hasn’t a new chapter been posted yet. Then I remember that I’m the author.

Thought about it, but then he’d have cartridge made more sense with how I envisioned the design. Can’t fit a lot of big ammo into the arms.

Yeah. Autocorrect is not my friend sometimes and I didn’t catch it. Gonna let it sit though. Kinda like imagining that if certain cyberware could talk it’d have different accents. Dermal Armor is now British.

Original dialogue is going to be more present later, when small changes start to snowball, and the real divergence from the main story begins. Some things will be the same though, because this version of V still has the same core personality as V from the game. It eases the strain I would have experienced if I tried to make a personality from scratch. Instead I’m adding on to a good base to make a character that feels more like a complete person. One who is direct and cautious but still has that ambition in life.

Body heat’s alright. I don’t spend any time on Ritual though. Vexelstrom, Growl and Mordo Rock are my go-to stations

This is my obligatory self review. Not gonna give myself five stars though. I’m probably gonna make mistakes, misspellings (I blame autocorrect and it’s weird agendas) and my update schedule is whenever I finish the next chapter. Other than that, read the story and make sure to comment. I don’t have an editor so I could use some feedback.

Thanks for the (actual) chapter