Thank you for the chapter!

I was about to track u down

Thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

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Thank you for the chapter! I have a question though: during the Clone Wars, will he use his own men as troops, or will he use droids, and if so, will he have his own factory?

Author: I know what directions to take the story! Also Author: lol I chose the no more chapter direction wahahahahaha!

With the money he makes couldn’t he develop his own clown factory in secret? And thank you for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Better yet, go make your own fanfic so someone else can chastise you over what you enjoy doing.

Why don’t you go read a real book?

I would recommend reading!!! This is a well thought out story especially when you compare it to other works on this site. An as long as its not another Skywalker remake I’m greatfully satisfied.

Hey Arthur, I don’t know if this is a concern to you, but you should try to work more on using the correct genders for characters; you seem to mix up he and she for male and female characters!

I personally think this is a good story idea; it's not another Anakin pov fanfic, which is already a thumbs up from me, and although the grammar isn’t 10 out of 10, it's still better than some of the other fanfics I’ve read.

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Is it a Lelouch/Zero situation?

Thank you for the chapter! What’s the name of the original?