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Yes please!!! Don't let my first ever comment go to waste!

Yes. But in the planning of some chapters wayyyy in the future I may change this so the story won't contradict itself.

Same! I had fun researching different dieties and theologies as I tried to find being of similar power. My idea was to show in this universe he is a very powerful being that inspired a lot of religions around the world! Reading back may have been a little much but ill leave it for now unless a lot of readers agree that this should be changed in some way!

This is an amazing story so far! Even though I don't normally read FL stories this is definitely one of the best ones I've read so far! Keep up the good work!

Really good first chapter! Now I'm looking forward to reading the rest even more!

Thanks for reading!

Even though its not my normal cup of tea, I did find myself pulled into the story. A rough patch here and there with the grammar but nothing bad enough to throw me off. I can definitely see the potential so keep it up!

I love it so far! Though the writing snags me a little bit, the story itself and the mystery of it really make me want to read more and stick with it!

Not my typical read, but it is a good story so far! The world building is good and the writing definitely got better as the chapters went on. Keep it up!

Definitely worth the read! While it did take a little to get used to the flow of the story in the beginning, it did get better as chapters went on and I bet it will only get better!