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they didn't kill kael. In that situation Tomo wasn't in the right frame of mind, if they didn't leave, who knows what might have happened plus sho was still there even though he did eventually let them go but if they had tried to kill kael he wouldn't have stood aside
I was into it at first, but I'm honestly not a fan of the direction you've decided to take. From other comments, I assume you'd explain why there is a demigod or beyonders in the Harry Potter world, but for me right now, it seems unnecessary. It's one thing if our mc transmigrated and have beyonder powers, but for there to be a whole group of beyonders, I don't see how that could happen.
if you're going to say my character development is bad then point out the issues. you just said my character development is bad, what exactly am I supposed to do with that?
That's half of the solution. The injury to his hands has stayed for too long, so regular healing wouldn't work. I don't want to give any spoilers, so you'd have to wait until it's time to get your answer.
🤣🤣🤣A lot of you guys just love violence too much. There would be violence, of course, but our mc has to grow to that point
🤣🤣 This is a hobby so I wouldn't want to waste my time if the reception isn't good. Thanks for your reassurance though. Look forward to volume 2
Yes, it does. People are more likely to break past their limits in such dangerous situations
I assume you're referring to chi mastery. This skill determines his control over chi, the higher the level the more things he can do with chi which includes stronger and more precise bending so yes it would give him a huge advantage while learning earthbending. unfortunately his hands are also a factor because earthbending needs stability and his hands are anything but
ideally, yes. unfortunately, our mc is a man from earth who knows little to nothing about fighting, plus he has no teacher.
🤣🤣I see you like chaose. Well, it's a story about war, so it's going to get progressively darker. I plan to show the dark side of War.