it's an overall good book with an interesting premise unfortunately the updates stability is horrible if you ever manage to greatly improve your update stability I will look past the other minor defects and give you five stars

can I get an update on how to rewrite is going

same. I don't know how so many other people got through that it was not what was advertised

there are too many chapters where he's a child I do understand they're setting up for future progression but that is not what I was advertised in this book so even though it is setting up every chapter I have to go through that is not what was a mobster in a magical world it is extremely annoying and not to mention they're not even the slightest bit entertaining on top of that so it is quite literally impossible for me to get to the part I might enjoy because there's just so much uninteraining chapters if they were fewer or better quality it would be much better

I found the same tiktok video you did and I'm happy you posted it here I also use the auto read function not very much enjoyed this book though I wish it was longer it is a really good book highly recommended

you said the story starts at volume two that means everything in volume 1 is prologue and you didn't reply to my other two points

so your response for having a massive 50 plus chapters prologue having to spend over 280 coins before even starting the beginning of the novel is to just skip to the beginning and not understand anything and have to pay from the very first chapter please try to make sense of this for me

so you're saying to even get to the main story you have to read over 50 chapters spend over 280 coins you realize how ridiculous that is and it's not to mention how much time it will take to get to that point what percentage of people that try reading your book come close to that point in the story not trying to be rude but I don't see any logic in the way you set this up

any news on the progress of the rewrite

I don't mind Harem novels but to describe it as his destiny cringe × trash = one star review

I understand what you were trying to do with the first chapter but you managed ruin the book in the first chapter it's not anything horrendous but after a info dump type opening you tried to make me feel sympathy for these two characters and you failed inside of feeling sympathy for what these two children are going through it gave me a very oh really this is how your going start off your story type of vibe so instead of feeling sympathy for any of these characters I was just rolling my eyes at every third sentence and I can't pinpoint what was so bad the grammar was fine and it's too early in the story for any potholes or writing mistakes but it just really made me dislike your book but you got a lot of free chapters I won't be reading them but I like that you did that so two and a half Stars

the sentence structure makes it completely unreadable

thanks

will there be more updates

I see you've completely misunderstood me I did not give it to one star because it was harem I gave it to one star because a book I once enjoyed slowly and painfully became very unentertaining

do you have any plans on continuing your book

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while I do see your point adding someone like that too early on we'll have a number of people dropping your book people haven't been given enough time and chapters to get a strong enough attachment to this book to continue reading through such annoying bits

there's super annoying side character and it manages to annoy me just as much as MC other than that it's okay

super unrealistic Romance really early on