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LaLouette

LaLouette

Lv2
2020-05-12 BergabungUnited Kingdom
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Tulisan

97.2h

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173

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5

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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette2yr
    Berkomentar

    I agree with the author. Characters need to be three dimensional and with realistics emotions for us the readers to empathise with Li M. and draw close to her. As humans, we forge who we will become throughout trials. t is a life journey. Thus, perfect characters are boring and unrealistic, and leave no room for growth and for us to understand the inner workings of that character (the whys for her actions, her heart desires, her way of thinking, and so on)

    Ch 30 The Bestiary Coalition
    Accidentally Married a Fox God - The Sovereign Lord Spoils His Wife
    Fantasi · MoonBirth
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Diterbitkan

    Second book I read feom the author. It is interesting how the plot develops. I do not want to write spoilers, but it starts from typical and warm story of a family to the insane!!! 👍 Next chapter please!

    THE ABERRANT
    Fantasi · AudreyJeru4
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas MEA_24_

    Wow! My first comment! 🤗 Thank you! And I hope my story will not disappoint you as you keep reading.

    Ch 1 Hidden in The Forbidden World - Part 1
    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Berkomentar

    Why not vary instead of ‘black men’? - A swish of dark cloth rushed in/brushed past/flew by - Men swathed in dark clothing. - The black silhouettes - The two men dressed like shadows - A clique of men shrouded in black cloth Author, I am enjoying your story! [img=recommend]

    Numerous corpses surrounded them. However, the stream of black men coming at the two of them felt endless. Whenever Chu Sihan and Chu Yun defeated a batch, another would replace it.
    Lord Chu’s Wife is Wild
    Sejarah · Clearing Painting
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Berkomentar

    Gripping first chapter! 🙌 I am going straight for second chapter and add your book to my library! Just watch out for punctuation marks at the end of dialogues and capital letters at the beginning of dialogues. 😉

    Ch 1 Beheaded duchess
    Villains also get second chance
    Sejarah · nishidurani
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Berkomentar

    Just a small technical detail: In the guillotine system, the blade would not be sitting on top of the person head; but it is locked right on top of the wodden frame, when the blade is unlocked the drop accelerate with gravity to allow a clean beheading of the person kneeling at the bottom. BACK TO THE STORY: I am very intrigued to learn what brought the duchess to her downfall. Excellent first chapter! Gripping start!

    Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
    Villains also get second chance
    Sejarah · nishidurani
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Diterbitkan

    I was a bit fed up with transmigration/reincarnation type stories and when I read the plot synopsis it was different, intriguing and mysterious just like the plot! It is a refreshing story with excellent writing style! There are a lot of enigma about the characters that will hook you! I hope author add more chapters soon as there are a lot of unanswered mysteries! (Who is tiger boy and where does he come from?)

    THE SECOND BORN'S CURSE
    Fantasi · AudreyJeru4
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas AudreyJeru4

    [img=recommend]

    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Diterbitkan

    This is the shameless author! Please give a chance to my first book, the writing only gets better. This is a tale of romance, action and adventure, and mystery. The political intrigue and the eerie mystery are not fully explained to you readers, but I hope you will enjoy the breadcrumbs and clues I left you throughout the chapters, And enjoy to be an active thinking reader! Xxx[img=recommend]

    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas Heart59

    I just started reading this morning “Loving you like no others." I am at chapter 10. :-D

    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas Heart59

    Heart59 Thank you for your comment! It is motivating me to keep on writing my best!

    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
    detail
  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Berkomentar

    I started this story randomly, so far it is intriguing. love the last kine “sappy love story” LOL Hopefully the MC will find a better woman for him along the story which I suppose he will be reborn! Shame he died for her though...

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Blue Phoenix
    Fantasi Timur · Tinalynge
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Berkomentar

    Love the description of this girl, especially the last line. She looks like a deadly angel.

    Bab ini telah dihapus.
    Dark Saviours
    Peperangan · YukioTu1994
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas YukioTu1994

    Your review really warm the whole of my heart! Sadly I also think the title was a poor choice from my part (probably why I do not attract readers) but as I am contracted it seems like I am stuck with it, but will look into it. So I am grateful you took a chance in reading my story and noticed the blood I pour into it. Thank you! Regarding the time jump elements I will also look into making it more accessible to the reader. Thank you for feedback and power stones!

    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas islinda

    Thank you! 🤗

    Ch 1 Hidden in The Forbidden World - Part 1
    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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  • LaLouette
    LaLouette3yr
    Balas monika_maggie

    Hello Miss Monika! I will forever remember your name! You are my first review! Thank you! It is lovely to know at least one person enjoy reading my story[img=recommend]

    The Crowned Cat and The Fallen Prince
    Fantasi · LaLouette
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