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I agree with the author. Characters need to be three dimensional and with realistics emotions for us the readers to empathise with Li M. and draw close to her. As humans, we forge who we will become throughout trials. t is a life journey. Thus, perfect characters are boring and unrealistic, and leave no room for growth and for us to understand the inner workings of that character (the whys for her actions, her heart desires, her way of thinking, and so on)
Why not vary instead of ‘black men’? - A swish of dark cloth rushed in/brushed past/flew by - Men swathed in dark clothing. - The black silhouettes - The two men dressed like shadows - A clique of men shrouded in black cloth Author, I am enjoying your story! [img=recommend]
Just a small technical detail: In the guillotine system, the blade would not be sitting on top of the person head; but it is locked right on top of the wodden frame, when the blade is unlocked the drop accelerate with gravity to allow a clean beheading of the person kneeling at the bottom. BACK TO THE STORY: I am very intrigued to learn what brought the duchess to her downfall. Excellent first chapter! Gripping start!
I was a bit fed up with transmigration/reincarnation type stories and when I read the plot synopsis it was different, intriguing and mysterious just like the plot! It is a refreshing story with excellent writing style! There are a lot of enigma about the characters that will hook you! I hope author add more chapters soon as there are a lot of unanswered mysteries! (Who is tiger boy and where does he come from?)
This is the shameless author! Please give a chance to my first book, the writing only gets better. This is a tale of romance, action and adventure, and mystery. The political intrigue and the eerie mystery are not fully explained to you readers, but I hope you will enjoy the breadcrumbs and clues I left you throughout the chapters, And enjoy to be an active thinking reader! Xxx[img=recommend]
Love the description of this girl, especially the last line. She looks like a deadly angel.
Your review really warm the whole of my heart! Sadly I also think the title was a poor choice from my part (probably why I do not attract readers) but as I am contracted it seems like I am stuck with it, but will look into it. So I am grateful you took a chance in reading my story and noticed the blood I pour into it. Thank you! Regarding the time jump elements I will also look into making it more accessible to the reader. Thank you for feedback and power stones!