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That's impossible. The Shards aren't that good at predicting metaphysical abilities. Yes, with enough information they can predict magic and the like, but those two are yet to do anything in this world to give them that information.

Limitless is a spatial manipulation technique. Infinity is a skill of Limitless that endlessly divides the space between the user and their target.

Huh? Unless he has technomancy or a form of Telekinesis, the Simurgh should be capable of taking apart anything that isn't made of some super metaphysical materials.

Entities are the epitome of max intelligence and zero wisdom. A massively advanced race that has the imagination of a brick. Their sole goal is to figure out a way to avoid the eventual death of the universe. And here's the thing, they already have every tool they need to achieve that, they just don't know how to effectively accomplish it. That's not even the worst part. According to the author, an Entity had even figured it out at some point, but a bunch of other Entities ganged up on it to take the solution for themselves, only to end up completely destroying that particular Entity alongside the solution to their problem. That's how dumb those things are.

You really love this word, "sight" don't you?

Maybe you meant damage? Cause this doesn't make that much sense otherwise

advantaged -> advanced*

more strong -> stronger

Writing quality is okay at best. Sentences are short, simple, and easy to read, which is good. However, there's barely any description of anything and there's a lot of telling rather than showing.The plot is straightforward. MC has experienced no hardships or struggled to achieve anything while everything has been handed to him on a silver platter.The system that he has is almost useless. Sure, it gave him a few extra skills that made him a bit stronger, but I feel like he could've achieved all of that on his own. Honestly, it seems like its there for word padding than anything else.*Sorry for the formating, WN on mobile sucks and doesn't accept my separate paragraphs.*

If he ate a Dragon Lacrima, the he shouldn't have a Dragon form cause second generation Dragon Slayers don't have the issue of Dragonification.