A new change from all the other fics out there. Your off to a great start and cant wait to weebwhat u have cooking.

Definitely has potential, love the character design ruthless and determined. Exactly what you need in a geeat Mc. Hope the author can deliver us a masterclass of novel. All the best mate.

Minutes turned into hours? Should be the correct format no?

How wonderful this such a beautiful, reali stic amd wonderful story. There are many stories in genres but only a few really shine and your definitely does. So keep up the good work man. Will be waiting for more great chapters.

How wonderful this such a beautiful, reali stic amd wonderful story. There are many stories in genres but only a few really shine and your definitely does. So keep up the good work man. Will be waiting for more great chapters.

Idea 2/ plot B. No harem pls pls pls

Kind of irrelevant but just got on today and I realized that they have ads now. Kinda annoying

Interesting, keep up the good work

No harEm

Very excited to See wbat you have here. hope you continue

Interesting, always loved these Kind if stories.

Isolated

Great job man like whaf you have here. waiting for more👍👍👍👍

Once again you’ve proven how an amazing writer you are. well fone mate

Good work mate. keep it up.👍👍

Interesting

This is honestly onE of the most amazing and well thought rebirth stories ive Read. it Really shows how muCh effort youve Put towards Your weitning and i have to tell you thAt im very impressed and im waiting to see WhaT else you have for us. great job man, fantastic writing. well dOne. Keep up the good Work mate.

This is honestly onE of the most amazing and well thought rebirth stories ive Read. it Really shows how muCh effort youve Put towards Your weitning and i have to tell you thAt im very impressed and im waiting to see WhaT else you have for us. great job man, fantastic writing. well dOne.

Good but the Grammar needs some work man

NOOO HAREM PLS