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That last comment, broooo 😂😂
I rarely write reviews, but this fanfic deserves all the praise I can give it! From the captivating storytelling to the great yet simple writing, every aspect of this work shines! The author manages to create an AU world that adds much new information to the HP universe, and the story doesn't just revolve around Britain. Character development is amazing, with each character feeling real and relatable, especially the family dynamics. The plot unfolds at a perfect pace, keeping you hooked with every chapter. And the updating stability is excellent, at least for now (keeping my fingers crossed on this one!). If you're looking for a Harry Potter fanfiction that truly stands out, look no further. This one has it all! Five stars without a doubt!
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What is is this 1.6/7 thing. If his HP were a 100 he would just recover 10 per hour.
Omg, another update, they're as rare as oversimplified videos at this point.
Bro changed his tune up real quick 😂
Yes, but I'm not argueing about your country's rules of "about [age]", I'm saying that this descriptor was used as an indicator for his appearence. So even given your studied rules, he still looks 15-17 years old, but that doesn't mean that he is 15-17 years old, he just looks like that. That's why I was ranting about reading comprehension being a myth today.
The current scene is depicted from a third-person perspective, as in to say - the speaker doesn't have direct information about the young man. And I quote, "He was a young man of about sixteen years old, standing at 174 cm tall,". This sentence alone gives you enough information to understand that the "person" is describing the young man's looks and not his actual age. The age was mentioned as an example of how the young man LOOKS relative to general age standards. Not to mention that this scene is happening 3 years after the events of the previous chapters, according to the currently given information. So just the context alone is enough for you to understand the text properly and not comment this dribble, especially if this is your native language. You see I wouldn't even mind if a person was confused, but then re-read it and said nothing, but you took the effort to announce your disarray. Next time, at least try to read what's before your eyes before wasting your precious time. However, I understand the miss-trust with the information given, considering we're reading this on webnovel. No offense, not my native language. So some words I wrote may seem more harsh than I intended.
5/5 fanfic. God... Again, this is amazing, your other HP story and this one just scratch a spot I never knew I had. Shame the update freguency is soooo slow. Honestly, I would even pay real money to read more. The characters feel real, the world - immersive, grammar is impeccable (considering my arguably lower standarts). I'm just glazing at this point. Usually, with HP fanfics, I have to do the authors job for them, and build a world in my head around the main cast myself, but with you, It's like enjoying a movie. Although I don't really have any interest for non-HP fanfics, I might even check out your other stories. Just goes to show how good your story telling ability is. P.S. please fix the formatting on chapter 6, thank you.