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Gavyn_Mack

Gavyn_Mack

Lv4

just average, but I can say I love reading, I mean just look at all those hours.........😁

2020-04-24 BergabungUnited States
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Tulisan

2.1kh

membaca

1914

Membaca buku-buku

Lencana

17

Momen

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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1h
    Berkomentar

    I'm curious to see more interactions between him and the captain

    Ch 20 Power of a Witch!
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    Reborn As a Pirate
    Fantasi · Rqmk
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1h
    Berkomentar

    oh 😶

    Ch 19 Torture time
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    Truck-Kun At Your Service!
    Fantasi · BAJJ
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1d
    Berkomentar

    I Wish there were more chapters, because now I'm left wondering.........what's gonna happen now!!!

    Ch 17 Maritime Warfare!
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    Reborn As a Pirate
    Fantasi · Rqmk
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1d
    Berkomentar

    I'm enjoying the story so far, and I Can't help but be interested. I can't wait for the next chapter

    Ch 18 Population Control
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    Truck-Kun At Your Service!
    Fantasi · BAJJ
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1d
    Berkomentar

    interesting

    Ch 18 Chapter 18
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1d
    Berkomentar

    can't wait for more chyapters

    Ch 16 Skull Pirate!
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    Reborn As a Pirate
    Fantasi · Rqmk
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack1d
    Berkomentar

    I want to see what happens next, what will they do. I've been waiting for an interaction between class A and izuku 👍

    Ch 55 Phantoms Dance: Ch 6
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    Rain of Sins
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack2d
    Berkomentar

    hopefully no harem

    Ch 7 Greedy
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    I am the Weakest Villain: The Regressor Became My Wife?
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack3d
    Berkomentar

    this better not turn into a harem

    'For now…'
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack3d
    Berkomentar

    i can't wait for more

    Ch 7 Greedy
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    I am the Weakest Villain: The Regressor Became My Wife?
    Fantasi · kingyujin
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack6d
    Berkomentar

    ah......chaos, what a great chapter, but now i have to wonder..............what's next. I Can't help but be excited, but thanks to you author, the wait for another chapter will be hell........😑

    Ch 53 Phantoms Dance: Ch 4
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    Rain of Sins
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack6d
    Berkomentar

    makes sense 😐

    (Note, as I am new to webnovel, and am just crossposting everything of mine via copy paste, I have no idea how to put pictures here, like you can on A03. So you'll have to use your mine- or join the discord)
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    Rain of Sins
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack6d
    Balas Najicablitz626

    sure, I've noticed that you don't use enough pronouns(He, she), which makes reading feel weird and fake in some way. You want your story to flow and connect, which leads to another problem I noticed. you don't use commas, you use periods. when you use periods for everything, it makes your story feel like it's starting and ending over and over again. so try adding more commas.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack6d
    Berkomentar

    I finally caught up to the latest chapter, all I can say is that the story is good, but the writing quality isn't. now don't get me wrong, I've seen worse out there, but the writing mistakes are noticeable and numerous. but like I said, this is a good story so, can't wait for more 👍

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
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    A Rider Kick in Marvel
    Filem · Najicablitz626
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack8d
    Berkomentar

    another day, another chapter, I can't wait for more. though I'm curious to see how everyone's relationships will grow

    Ch 18 Chapter 17: Resting and Healing
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    He Who Feels Guilt [Honkai: Star Rail]
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack9d
    Berkomentar

    honestly, I can't wait to see more, i want MORE FIGHTS!!!! I'm excited

    Ch 51 Phantoms Dance: Ch 2
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    Rain of Sins
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack15d
    Balas KanTouTanTau

    😑 what is this

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    Rain of Sins
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack17d
    Diterbitkan

    The story is interesting, it's more than your typical evil izuku story. It explains how and why the events happened the way they did, and it does this exceptionally well, by providing the pov of other characters, and though you may not see a lot of izuku's pov.when it does arrive, it's even more exciting. Though sometimes it can be a bit long until you see his pov. Overall i recommend this story, the writing quality is good, and even though it's a fanfic, the way it leads to each event, feels like a different story. for people who don't like a story that involves multiple pov's, this story may not be for you, but I suggest giving it a try 👍

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    Rain of Sins
    Komik · Z75
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack17d
    Berkomentar

    interesting 🤔

    Ch 56 Specialization
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    The Chronicles of a Scalebound Sage: Reincarnated as a Hydra Familiar
    Fantasi · ChildOfAidon
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  • Gavyn_Mack
    Gavyn_Mack17d
    Berkomentar

    I honestly dislike her family, but I wonder what Bjorn's thoughts are, after all he is the MC.

    Ch 55 The Sanguine Mage
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    The Chronicles of a Scalebound Sage: Reincarnated as a Hydra Familiar
    Fantasi · ChildOfAidon
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