Laine_Darvenslee

nah you good, I enjoy the story it's actually one of my favorite, keep up the good work.

this chapter fill like I've read the same paragraph over and over again, the author just over described everything with the same kind of description.

Why??

Author please just do a time skip cause you basically talking about the same thing just with different explanations I'm getting bored

I don't know where to begin, disappointed so much potential but the Author just didn't care much I mean why give the mc so much talent if his not going to used it, almost all increased of strength is because of external help either he use pills or magical powders I won't mind if he use it one or two times but everysingle time why does he even have a heavenly spiritual root and a supreme physique for and let's not forget how dumb the mc is, I'll just stop here caused it's just a wasted potential.

I'm tired of the author saying the mc has all this talent but never actually used them the only reason his strength has increased is because of external help disappointed wasted the potential of the story.

we already know what's about to happen

hoooooooo myyyyy god!!!! my mind

why is the mc complaining so much about being weaker than others it's annoying.

Dear Author can you please stop changing things midway through the story.