As of chapter 7, the background and development are pretty solid so far. the pacing isn't too fast or slow, in my opinion. It's still quite early on, but I'm looking forward to seeing how the story further unfolds

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Chapter length is surprisingly long but is so nice with so few chapters out, it's satisfying knowing that I'll get to enjoy the story progressing and not be frustrated with a short chapter and left hanging. The world backround and set up is very well done so far, and its a really enjoyable read so far for me. Looking forward to future updates, thanks author for the good work 👏

lol I've learned that lesson with other stories, but everytime I hold out hope

dude, the premise for this story is unique and has SO MUCH POTENTIAL! looking forward to more updates 😀

I really like the story, very interesting but the chapters are so short! please author it's torture waiting 😂

not many eragon fics, so far it has been amazing. Your character is well made and not some edge lord, or emo, keep up the good work author 👍

same I was just sick af for 3 days, hope you feel better author !!!!!

thought eh why the he'll not and let me tell you not disappointed at all keep it up author 👍

dude not going to lie this has potential and just the first few chapters are unique to all the other stories I've read. please keep posting this story...... 🧡

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I've got to say it's pretty good for only having a chapter out, looking forward to reading more when it's released.

Mei all the way brother ya

I like the story, wish updates were more frequent but the author is doing their thing so can't really complain. This story is very similar to another twilight fanfic, (almost the exact same) obviously there are differences. A good read so far and am eager to see how the story progresses

really great quality so far, no grammar issues really, great background and flow to the story, it doesn't feel rushed and to be honest I'm really digging the character and plot setting keep up the good work author sir

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All right everyone this is a stick up. Give this story your power stones for the good quality and its update speed hahaha

Please dont drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Give it some more time <3. <3. <3. <3. <3. <3. <3.

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