Nice work. I lik the way the story is progressing. The writer has also improved tremendously. However, I feel that more improvement is needed especially in the area of updating.
This Lady Wilmot is fearless. The King was wrought when Maddy's Mum interfered in his relationship with Mandy. Imagine what will happen to Sophie's mum.
It's true what they say about a person being a product of his or her experience. it shows that you cannot really judge a person becos you don't know what made him/ her turn out the way they did. What a sad childhood and sad story.
Talk about blood sucking vampire. I am thoroughly surprised by Lady Catherine drinking blood and even killing her maid in the process. James is in for some tough times.