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tim_badii7 months agoDiterbitkanhonestly these book has a lot of potential expect the harem route stuff is not good cause what i like in inazuma the sense of adventure and dealing with hardship you made little to easy for them and the part that annoyed me the most that you dropped it before the finale match of the football frontier 😭😭😭
- tim_badiia year agoBerkomentar
well i made some mistakes here .sorry guys but i fixed .Happy reading
- tim_badiia year agoBalas Y4RN1
alright I will try to live up to your expectations what you say make sense but again I can't promise you anything because my work just started and had a lot planned but I don't want to spoil it right now. I will try to make updates daily and I will takes some idea from history some tactics from great general Hannibal Barca and recreate it for my own use ..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
- tim_badiia year agoBalas Y4RN1
I want to thank you again for reading my story.As for naming characters Im not that good at it im open to any suggestions.I will not follow history throughly .As for Rome wont be better to have united as an empire right of the bat so they can be seen as formidable enemy.All in all I greatly appriciate you reading my story it means a lot to me.Thank you
- tim_badiia year agoBalas Y4RN1
sorry bro again I'm not that good at giving names I will accept any suggestions
- tim_badiia year agoBalas Y4RN1
well the time period Its first punic war when Carthage suffered defeat I want to change history you see I will add a volume 0 and I'll add the timeline how about that??[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - tim_badiia year agoBalas Y4RN1
well I'm not that good at giving names do you have any suggestions I will immediately change the names I'm still a newbie author of course thanks for reading my novel by the way[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - tim_badiia year agoDiterbitkan
Author here I like to express my gratitude to all the readers that stumbled upon my work .I am great admirer of carthage civilaziation and espacially its famous general Hannibal Barca .So I hope for this to be a great reading exprince for you guys ..And of coure a shamless 5 star rating .
- tim_badiia year agoDiterbitkan
at first I was confused by the title but after I started reading it I liked the story and world building and I didn't find any problems with the writing qualities it deserves a solid 5 star in my opinion and I'm happy with consecutive updates 🥰🥰🥰
- tim_badiia year agoBerkomentar
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