Lol love that webnovel

if this is about my spelling errors I apologize and will be fixing them soon. If it's about Alex well you'll just have to see

With grate power comes great cheese sticks

thank you

nice

Loving this so far

I'm a little late but its in yaun and not us bill

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Ya sure but that's kind of the point also try to find new words for a existing song and its almost harder then making it from scratch

There's also the fact that to her he attempted to rape her

He has to use the skill but as soon as he does ya

Yes but it took these guys 50 years in a middle age era for them to do this. And even modern day peaple are being manipulated

I'm surprised that he's made him overpowered but the story still great

This battle felt so slow and powerless compared to the fights we've been seeing like there was only a single shield and barely able hold to the great attack was only like few magic icicles

A little late but probably because as long as it works which it does it will be fine

228 is the highest IQ recorded

I understand why he I'd like this wanting to protect his interests and all but he is getting a little to much not much but maybe tone it done a little.

Congrats on 1k views I found where this is posted further unfortunately it stopped posting there to I think if you continue posting on webnovel you would have more views and comments

Although it is only one chapter long at the moment it sound really interesting and its very well written I hope that it will be continued in the future.

Why did you stop posting it sounds like it would be a very good story if you didn't and your still posting somewhere else could you put that in the description please